The Battle For Oz: Exitium

24 Apr

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The court erupted with angry shouts of agreement. They were urging an immediate action to have her banished to the wastelands and they were not backing down. There was nothing she could say or do to convince them otherwise as even her husband did not squeak in her defence. She was done for.

Before the sun could set that day, she was escorted out of the kingdom. A crowd gathered in the streets to bid her farewell, and she had a feeling they would be celebrating once she was gone. That made her even more furious, but she knew her orders for their banishments would only fall on deaf ears.

As she left the happy kingdom behind, most of her feather-skinned guards continued on with her. She told them they could stay and celebrate, but it was more of a threat than a kind offer. Nevertheless, she enjoyed their nervous and silent company.

By the time they reached the black, flat, foul smelling wastelands, her guards found her a large rabbit hole that led to a giant burrow. She wanted to strike them on the head for finding such an unfitting place for her status, but she held her hand back when she found a motherless litter of muttbits curled up among each other.

Muttbits were like dogs, except for their rabbit ears, long whiskers and two sharp front teeth. They were a banished species for their wild and aggressive behaviour. Honestly, she once thought of them revolting but after being able to identify with them, she thought they would make good pets.

She also had an idea… a crazy idea she was not going to let go.

The muttbits were strangely welcoming towards her as she invaded their home, and it was probably because of the raw meat she was feeding them. So while she bonded with her newfound friends, her guards began to make the stinking place liveable. Torches were placed around the dome like burrow and a pile of pillows were stacked up at a corner for her sleepy head. They even sprayed some perfume in the air, hoping to rid the nose scrunching smell.

The burrow itself had a rather high ceiling and plenty of space. It was a suitable place for a home in the wastelands, but she knew she was not staying. How could a royal live in such a God forsaken place? She may be insane as what the court had called her earlier that day, but she was not stupid. This burrow was merely a temporary home until she found a new one; a new palace to be precise.

As she held back her mad urges of reclaiming her throne, she took her time in raising and breeding her muttbits. Two weeks in and she had doubled the number, with half as big as full-grown bears. Her guards were terrified of the muttbits because they would snap violently every time her guards approached them. But when it came to her, they were angels. She was convinced they saw her as their mother, and she soon started calling them her babies.

Once she had raised an army of muttbits, she knew the right time had arrived. She was going to claim the throne and be called queen again. Her muttbits would fight for her and she would regain her power. But she wouldn’t be fighting for the throne of this land, as most people would have expected her to. Instead, she found another land filled with powerful magic she coveted. That land was Oz.

She first learned about Oz from a book in the royal library. It was a place with magical creatures, picturesque mountains, lush forests, and a city built with green glass. Green was not her favourite colour, but jewels were definitely her favourite accessories.

On top of that, there was powerful magic; magic that she could later use to seek revenge on everyone that agreed to have her banished. Oh, wouldn’t that be glorious? she silently asked herself with a smile plastered on her fair face.

With her imaginations floating around her head, she became even more excited. When she could not contain it any longer, she ordered her guards to bring her a small velvet pouch. Of course, no one knew what was in that pouch except her, for if they did she would have been banished much earlier.

The contents of this little pouch were actually stolen from the royal archives, where artefacts of different realms were displayed in glass casings. Weeks before her trial, she snuck into the archives and stole the tail of a winged monkey that was supposedly from Oz. She then had it burnt and mixed with black fairy dust. From the words of different magic books, the powdery substance should take her to Oz, and she was so sure of it.

Rounding up her guards and her muttbits, she placed the small pouch in the centre of the burrow. Everyone was waiting for a special spell of some sort, but instead she ordered, “Burn it!”

The guards who were unfortunate enough to be standing near the torches, pulled the torches out of their holders and walked up to the pouch. As the guards lowered the flames, the pouch immediately caught on fire but nothing expected happened. After a few minutes of nothing, she thought the magic had failed and her chest began to bubble in anger. But when her disappointment was about to burst into fury, a deafening pop startled her angry heart.

The velvet pouch had exploded into a large cloud of dust and the dust began swirling. The air in the burrow was so still that all eyes were locked on the dust in fascination. Unfortunately for the guards in the centre, they only had a brief moment of awe before they were pulled into a rapidly growing tornado. There were screaming and growling, and also a hysterical laughter that was escaping her lips. The magic was working and she couldn’t be happier.

 As the tornado burst through the top of the burrow, it swept everyone off their feet. A few seconds after the outburst of the tornado, it died down quickly and the wastelands returned to its usual silence. The only difference was the big hole in the ground that no one would have ever noticed.


This is chapter one; a teaser to The Battle For Oz: Exitium.

Exitium is book 1 in my latest novelette trilogy and it would be released at the end of May. It will also be free to download! To get you excited, I have a slideshow below that will introduce you to some of the characters and the contents of the book. Check it out!

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As you can see, the book is filled with awesome illustrations that I myself cannot get enough of 🙂 I hope that you guys would feel the same way too! To know more you can visit the Facebook page, but for now this should be enough to ‘tease’ you with.

***UPDATE: The Battle For Oz trilogy will be combined into a novel. A crowd-funding project was done to make it possible. Visit HERE to find out more!

The Battle For Oz © 2014 – 2015 Jeyna Grace


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33 responses to “The Battle For Oz: Exitium

  1. Juan Zung

    April 24, 2014 at 1:25 pm

    Hey, what a great start to your story! I always enjoy a re-enivisioned version of a classic. I like how your version gets the drama moving quickly and your Alice seems really dynamic. Will be interested to see how it plays out.

    Amazing illustrations too!

    • Jeyna Grace

      April 24, 2014 at 1:47 pm

      Thank you! Glad you think so 🙂 Btw, that’s not Alice. Haha!

      • Juan Zung

        April 24, 2014 at 4:00 pm


        • Jeyna Grace

          April 24, 2014 at 4:00 pm

          Why did you think so though? Interesting 🙂

          • Juan Zung

            April 24, 2014 at 4:06 pm

            Just got my source materials mixed up. I was thinking Alice in wonderland, with the rabbit hole and the trial and everything. Sorta creating my own story in my head.

            Looking forward to reading more of your story though, except with a little less presumptuous conjecture on my end!

          • Jeyna Grace

            April 24, 2014 at 4:47 pm

            Haha! I see 🙂

            And I’m looking forward to releasing it soon!

  2. angie chui

    April 25, 2014 at 7:17 am

    amazing artwork!

    • Jeyna Grace

      April 25, 2014 at 9:21 am

      The artist is amazing. Haha!

      • angie chui

        April 26, 2014 at 8:29 am

        well, so are you so its a great match indeed. keep up the great work, both of you

  3. chloe_@freeasagirlwithwings

    April 25, 2014 at 10:52 am

    OMG!!! It’s soooo cool! Will it be published??? I will be the first buyer. If I can find a bookstore, that is. 🙂
    Thanks for checking out my blog. I’d love it if you could follow me; I’m following you.

    • Jeyna Grace

      April 25, 2014 at 12:15 pm

      It will be published as an e-book, but if the response is good we might just self-publish in paperback 🙂
      You’re welcome, and thank you for visiting mine too!

  4. b00kreader

    April 25, 2014 at 12:25 pm

    Your teaser is great! I cannot wait to read more 😀

    • Jeyna Grace

      April 25, 2014 at 12:26 pm

      Thank you! I cannot wait to release it 😀

  5. jessje89

    April 28, 2014 at 3:24 pm

    hey! Just passed by here for curiosity. Are you seriously a novel writer? Wow, that´s very vey unexpected !! 🙂

    • Jeyna Grace

      April 28, 2014 at 3:27 pm

      Hey! I guess so, an indie one though 🙂 Haha! Thanks for stopping by!

  6. i3iteme72

    April 28, 2014 at 10:45 pm

    Very nice story, it really shows your of writing, keep it up!

    • Jeyna Grace

      April 29, 2014 at 8:29 am

      Thank you 🙂 Will definitely do so!

  7. njmckay

    May 2, 2014 at 7:26 am

    This sounds amazing and I can’t wait to download it. Congrats on getting it e-published.

    • Jeyna Grace

      May 2, 2014 at 9:57 am

      Thank you! I hope you would enjoy it!

  8. areebahmad98

    June 5, 2014 at 11:12 pm

    Very amazing Illustrations… And the teaser is gripping too. Hope to read your book soon…

    • Jeyna Grace

      June 6, 2014 at 9:51 am

      Yup, the illustrations are awesome! Glad you like the teaser, please let me know what you think of the book after you’re done 😀

  9. j.rknight

    December 29, 2014 at 11:07 pm

    This is really exciting!
    I loved it; I thought it was incredible!
    If you wouldn’t mind, I would love to give you some suggestions? I hope they don’t offend you?
    I would have loved to have a description of this character, and possibly a name? And also some dialogue? Even it was someone sentencing her out of the Kingdom and down the ‘Rabbit Hole’ so to speak, who is exactly? A Queen, not not a Queen? What is her name; is it Alice? Haha, so many questions.
    But I do think that the easiest thing that you could add to this to make it EVEN better is dialogue, picture is like a movie; the first seen would only be here walking, adding bits and bops to create a potion and getting swept away. If we had dialogue, then it would be so much more intense and even more exciting.
    Have to say I am hooked already though!
    Hope that you are open to some critique! 😀 ^_^

    • Jeyna Grace

      December 30, 2014 at 8:22 am

      Thank you! And sure, constructive criticism is always welcomed 🙂

      This character remains anonymous until chapter 10, so no name and barely any description. I wanted to keep her unknown and leave readers guessing. If not, I wouldn’t be so stingy with information 🙂

      Your suggestions were actually suggested by another author previously. Strange though, because readers who read the first part of the book enjoyed the lack of information. Makes me wonder, do authors and readers have a different view point on how a story should be written? What do you think?

      Anyway, thank you for giving this a read and leaving a comment. Really appreciate it!

      • j.rknight

        December 30, 2014 at 1:59 pm

        That is very interesting!! You know what, I’m going to re-read it as a reader and not an author and get back to you! Haha 🙂

        • Jeyna Grace

          December 30, 2014 at 2:11 pm

          Haha! That can be done? Looking forward to your comments as a reader.

  10. bellesvanity

    April 15, 2015 at 12:41 am

    You’re writing style is wonderful, as is the artwork!

  11. Angel

    May 11, 2015 at 3:14 pm

    Great work! I think I might have to pre-order this one 😀

    • Jeyna Grace

      May 11, 2015 at 3:20 pm

      Thank you 😀 It will be out this coming September, though there won’t be any illustrations. I hope you check it out 🙂

      • Angel

        May 11, 2015 at 3:34 pm

        Who needs illustrations…? That’s what imagination is for 😉


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