FHB: Chapter 11

19 Sep

FHB Chapter 11

Lucius got out of bed the next morning so close to forgetting about Severus’ little problem.  It was only until he witnessed the bullying himself did he act on it.

It was right after breakfast. Students were heading to their classes and Lucius was heading to his. As he walked past a small garden within the school compound, he spotted three boys standing by a tree.

Curiosity struck him as he walked towards them.

“Shouldn’t you be in class?” Lucius asked.

The boys spun around immediately, and behind them was Severus sitting against the bark of the tree.

“Oh yes, we should get going,” the boy with messy black hair said as he signalled his friends to follow after him.

Though they took big strides, they did not manage to escape. Oddly, it was not Lucius who stopped them but Ms Evans.

Ms Evans walked up to them and demanded, “Apologize.”

“For what?” the boy replied.

“Apologize, Potter,” Ms Evans repeated.

The Potter boy chuckled and said, “I did nothing wrong, Lily. Why should I apologize?”

Ms Evans seemed to be struggling in holding in her anger, and when she gave up, she swung her hand right across the boy’s cheek.

Severus scrambled to his feet at the sound of the slap. The Potter boy said nothing while his friend turned to Lucius and said, “She hit him! She should be punished!”

Lucius had no problem punishing them both, after all, it was Gryffindor losing points.

“Fifteen points from all four of you,” Lucius said, and before the boys could question why, he continued, “Fifteen points for bullying a fellow student and fifteen points for physical violence.”

“That’s sixty points from Gryffindor!” the Potter boy finally spoke.

“You count well, Potter. Next time, think before you act,” Lucius merely said before ushering Severus away from the scene.

When Severus tried to protest, Lucius held on to his shoulder and led him away.

Lucius brought Severus to class before heading to his, but the day was not over. During lunch, Lucius invited Severus for a walk and he intended to give a pretty good lecture.

“Do you know why those boys keep bullying you?” Lucius asked.

“Because I’m weird?” Severus replied.

“Well, partly. I think they bully you because you need a girl to stand up for you,” Lucius pointed out.

“Lily was just helping me. She’s a good friend-”

“She’s not worthy to be your friend. In fact, you don’t need a friend like her. She’s a mudblood after all,” Lucius interrupted.

“What’s wrong with mudbloods? They are just like us,” Severus asked innocently.

“They’re not. They are outsiders hoping to take what is rightfully ours. They don’t deserve it. Your friend, Lily, doesn’t deserve it.”

“But I can’t leave her,” Severus almost whispered his words.

“Make new friends Lucius, then you can leave her,” Lucius advised.

As Lucius left Severus pondering, he began to wonder. Why did Severus need Ms Evans? What kind of a friendship did they have? Was it something so inseparable that the thought of parting ways sounded impossible?

Lucius never had a friend that meant that much to him. He didn’t like being tied down. He was the lone ranger who preferred working by himself, and that worked well for him all these years.

Friend, who invented that word anyway? Lucius silently asked himself.

As Quidditch season started drawing in, Lucius noticed Severus taking his advice. Severus stopped hanging out with Ms Evans as much as he used to, and started hanging out with other Slytherin boys. He also started using the word ‘mudblood’ when Ms Evans wasn’t around.

Lucius had a feeling that one day, a slip of a tongue would end Severus’ ties with Ms Evans altogether. Now wouldn’t that be something to celebrate? Lucius smiled at the idea.

But that was one celebration he would reconsider in due time.

One sunny morning, the match between Slytherin and Ravenclaw began at the blow of a whistle. Lucius enjoyed watching a Quidditch match, but he never liked the idea of playing it. Let’s just say he wasn’t a big fan of heights.

As the quaffle changed hands and the bludgers shot at unsuspecting players, something unexpected happened.

Lucius was climbing up to the professors’ watchtower when a wild bludger crashed into the wooden structure. It rammed against the stairs and the inner pillars like a loose cannon, and it cut through Lucius’ path. Immediately, Lucius scrambled for his wand but before a spell could be cast, the bludger hit him in the stomach and forced him through the supposedly thick wooden panels.

The bludger free itself from him and swerve back into the Quidditch field while Lucius madly waved his arms and grabbed onto the Ravenclaw banner around the tower.

When he finally had a firm grip, Lucius braved himself and took a look down. He was dangling high above the dark waters of the lake, and his heartbeat rose almost instantly. When Lucius tried calling for help, the loud cheering students had their back against him and he was completely out sight.

Nobody knew he was there, not even his ‘friends’.

He thought of climbing back up to the platform or lowering himself to the lake, but while he tried to rationalize both options he saw a Ravenclaw player swerving around a nearby watchtower. Without having to squint much, he knew who it was.

What should he do? Lucius would rather save himself, but a broom ride to solid ground was much more safer. If only that player wasn’t Tanya, he wouldn’t have to contemplate so much.

To Be Continued…

(Leave a comment below or vote on whether Lucius should save himself or ask for help!)


Posted by on September 19, 2013 in Fan Fiction (Novel)


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22 responses to “FHB: Chapter 11

  1. aspenlinmer

    September 19, 2013 at 10:29 pm

    I like how you had Lucius suggesting to Severus that he should not have a girl standing up for him. I had never thought of that and I think it presents a solid reason for why Severus would shout at Lily later when she steps in for him.

    Thank you for sharing your writing.


    • Jeyna Grace

      September 19, 2013 at 10:40 pm

      I always thought Lucius as the prideful alpha male, so that was probably something he would have done 🙂
      Thank you for reading!

      • aspenlinmer

        September 20, 2013 at 11:53 am

        Yep, I agree.

        In my mind’s eye I also think Lucius had an enormous impact on Severus.

        I think that’s why I liked your story. 🙂


        • Jeyna Grace

          September 20, 2013 at 12:24 pm

          Same here 🙂 That’s why Severus really looked after Draco.

          I’m really glad you’re enjoying it so far.

          • aspenlinmer

            September 20, 2013 at 11:34 pm


            I think Severus saw a lot of potential in Draco…Draco is after all a very talented young man. I would love to know more about what Severus was teaching Draco in the background of books 7…and how this influenced who he became.


          • Jeyna Grace

            September 20, 2013 at 11:38 pm

            Indeed, he was very talented. Too bad he was brought up wrongly.
            Oh, yes, that would definitely be very interesting.

  2. Adelina Novia

    September 26, 2013 at 6:27 am

    Well, I’m sorry if my comment here looks spam..
    But your blog was awesome and full of good fanfictions. I’ll bookmark your blog, track and read your stories in my spare time.

    • Jeyna Grace

      September 26, 2013 at 9:26 am

      Not spam at all 🙂 Thanks, I’m glad you think so!

  3. abbles

    September 30, 2013 at 12:08 am


  4. abbles

    September 30, 2013 at 12:08 am

    Sorry, had to do that. Lovely as usual, Jeyna 🙂

  5. TRShakespeare

    November 29, 2013 at 6:11 am

    And we have a tie which means you finally get to choose for yourself which way the story goes. Was that exciting?? Oh Lucius I bet sometimes he wishes he actually does have real friends. He must be a really lonely man deep down.

    • Jeyna Grace

      November 29, 2013 at 9:23 am

      Haha, choosing is both a pro and con. That’s his lack, even in the books he seems to be all alone.

  6. TRShakespeare

    November 29, 2013 at 11:49 pm

    Which do you prefer then? Choosing or not choosing? I wonder at the age he was in the books if he ever regretted not making any real friends.

    • Jeyna Grace

      November 29, 2013 at 11:58 pm

      It depends. With my previous fan fic I would rather choose because the plot was solid in my head. This one could sway either way for me.

      • TRShakespeare

        November 30, 2013 at 12:03 am

        So you are more open to how the plot of this fic turns out?

        • Jeyna Grace

          November 30, 2013 at 12:04 am

          Kind of, yes. Of course there’s a pre-planned timeline, but I wouldn’t mind twisting and turning to reach the end with the votes.

          • TRShakespeare

            November 30, 2013 at 12:08 am

            Wow, as my skill level currently sits I’m not totally comfortable doing that right bow but good on you 😀

          • Jeyna Grace

            November 30, 2013 at 12:17 am

            I’m sure you’ll get there the more you write 🙂

          • TRShakespeare

            November 30, 2013 at 12:21 am

            I’m sure I will to. I just need to stop being a scaredy cat and post something for people to read :/

          • Jeyna Grace

            November 30, 2013 at 12:23 am

            Be confident 🙂 Once you get past the fear, you’ll grow faster.

          • TRShakespeare

            November 30, 2013 at 12:29 am

            I suppose that is true. Need to get my butt moving then!


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